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27th February, 2010 at 17:01:42 -

Yeah, the bricks look way better when they're more defined to be hoenst :]

 
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27th February, 2010 at 17:34:35 -

I think -J-'s second image looks bette than yours.
I would keep it that way, but add more special effects and object,

 
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27th February, 2010 at 22:37:14 -

Sketchys edit looks nice but I'd work on the light shaft because your edit destroyed it imho. I like the sharpness of J's original but his remake looks like if it was animated correctly, it would be beautiful.

 
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28th February, 2010 at 04:33:57 -

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That's it after increasing the contrast, improving the pillars, and then I added a slight gradient to the whole thing.
I think all I want to fix at this point is the background.

If anyone wishes to suggest any final touches I'd be more than happy to hear them!

Edit: Now added subtle background.
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Edited by -J-

 
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28th February, 2010 at 12:23:36 -

Good job! That's a huge improvement


 
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