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Phredreeke Don't listen to this idiotRegistered 03/08/2002
Points 4504
27th March, 2005 at 08:45:50 -
I've worked some on Sarah's new look for SS3. Here's what I've come up with. New hair, skirt, strapless top.
Public Service Announcement: Phredreeke has a dirty mind Edited by the Author.
- Ok, you must admit that was the most creative cussing this site have ever seen -
Make some more box arts damnit!
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Willy C
Registered 14/02/2004
Points 1524
27th March, 2005 at 09:16:07 -
and she is about to pull up her skirt and show us her ass!
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Mr. Esch Stone GooseRegistered 30/05/2003
Points 0
27th March, 2005 at 09:53:57 -
THIS is what real pixel boobs look like
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Do you feel you are being... watched?
Matt Boothman The Nissan Micra of forum membersRegistered 20/09/2002
Points 109
27th March, 2005 at 10:04:17 -
Her left arm is bent weirdly. Her wrist looks like it's twisted round. Otherwise, nice pic.
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AndyUK Mascot ManiacRegistered 01/08/2002
Points 14586
27th March, 2005 at 10:39:18 -
Looks a little weird, but so do your other characters. It fits the style well.
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The Chris StreetAdministrator
Unspeakably Lazy AdminRegistered 14/05/2002
Points 48488
28th March, 2005 at 06:32:09 -
Ooer my comment got deleted. Probably for the best.
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Phredreeke Don't listen to this idiotRegistered 03/08/2002
Points 4504
28th March, 2005 at 07:36:45 -
For some reason I want to make an animation of Sarah pulling up her skirt, showing a heart with the name Circy tattooed on her ass...
- Ok, you must admit that was the most creative cussing this site have ever seen -
Make some more box arts damnit!
http://create-games.com/forum_post.asp?id=285363
Joshua M.
Registered 01/06/2004
Points 1999
5th April, 2005 at 05:02:32 -
I personally think that your sprites look awfull. But that's an opinion.
Assault Andy Administrator
I make other people create vaporwareRegistered 29/07/2002
Points 5686
5th April, 2005 at 05:32:59 -
Joshua - Please try to use constructive critisism. Calling the art 'awful' does not tell him how to improve it.
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axel Crazy?
Registered 05/02/2005
Points 4766
5th April, 2005 at 08:00:48 -
it's kind of simple and cartoonish, but it's good! i like your style.
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Joshua M.
Registered 01/06/2004
Points 1999
10th April, 2005 at 13:30:41 -
Ok, now, first of all, give the sprites a good pose. The current pose is just boring and standard. Also, just look at it. The head is turned to the left, the upper body seems to be facing the viewer and the legs are at the same direction of the head (a bit).
And why does Sarahs face look like one of a guy? Try to add some personality.
Also, some shading would do.
So, overal, try some personality to your sprites, so, different poses per character, different faces (not just hair and eye color changes, but completely redesigned faces).
It's important that the viewer doesn't directly think 'it's just a sprite'. Even if you have a very simple sprite, if you add some personality to them, they can become really nice ones.
There, is that constructive critisism?
Retired Kliker Lazarus The Ed Wood JR of TDCRegistered 18/07/2003
Points 7363
10th April, 2005 at 14:39:58 -
I think that it looks a little to much like Scurvey. You should use a diffrent build for it.
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Yai7 Peace & LoveRegistered 28/01/2002
Points 3197
10th April, 2005 at 15:17:56 -
Here is a sample of my'n as if I would making a game about a girl named serah...!
I wonder if she will be capable for a jump that was similar to Luigi's jump!
Now you should work on a gal that has Mario's abilities!
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Yai7 Peace & LoveRegistered 28/01/2002
Points 3197
10th April, 2005 at 16:08:24 -
And here's suncheeze!
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