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Phredreeke

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27th March, 2005 at 08:45:50 -

I've worked some on Sarah's new look for SS3. Here's what I've come up with. New hair, skirt, strapless top.

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27th March, 2005 at 09:16:07 -

and she is about to pull up her skirt and show us her ass!

 
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27th March, 2005 at 09:53:57 -

THIS is what real pixel boobs look like

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27th March, 2005 at 10:04:17 -

Her left arm is bent weirdly. Her wrist looks like it's twisted round. Otherwise, nice pic.

 
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27th March, 2005 at 10:39:18 -

Looks a little weird, but so do your other characters. It fits the style well.

 
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28th March, 2005 at 06:32:09 -

Ooer my comment got deleted. Probably for the best.

 
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28th March, 2005 at 07:36:45 -

For some reason I want to make an animation of Sarah pulling up her skirt, showing a heart with the name Circy tattooed on her ass...

 
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5th April, 2005 at 05:02:32 -

I personally think that your sprites look awfull. But that's an opinion.

 

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5th April, 2005 at 05:32:59 -

Joshua - Please try to use constructive critisism. Calling the art 'awful' does not tell him how to improve it.

 
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5th April, 2005 at 08:00:48 -

it's kind of simple and cartoonish, but it's good! i like your style.

 
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10th April, 2005 at 13:30:41 -

Ok, now, first of all, give the sprites a good pose. The current pose is just boring and standard. Also, just look at it. The head is turned to the left, the upper body seems to be facing the viewer and the legs are at the same direction of the head (a bit).
And why does Sarahs face look like one of a guy? Try to add some personality.
Also, some shading would do.

So, overal, try some personality to your sprites, so, different poses per character, different faces (not just hair and eye color changes, but completely redesigned faces).
It's important that the viewer doesn't directly think 'it's just a sprite'. Even if you have a very simple sprite, if you add some personality to them, they can become really nice ones.

There, is that constructive critisism?

 

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10th April, 2005 at 14:39:58 -

I think that it looks a little to much like Scurvey. You should use a diffrent build for it.

 
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10th April, 2005 at 15:17:56 -

Here is a sample of my'n as if I would making a game about a girl named serah...!
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I wonder if she will be capable for a jump that was similar to Luigi's jump!

Now you should work on a gal that has Mario's abilities!

 
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10th April, 2005 at 16:08:24 -

And here's suncheeze!

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