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DeadmanDines

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24th August, 2005 at 07:43:18 -

I've been working on a plot for a story/comic (possibly), but I don't have anyone to run it past.

I've not done much to it for a year, but if I write the basic idea in a little .doc file, would some of you care to read and make suggestions/questions?

It's meant to be a kinda scifi/conspiracy thing so anyone who could point out flaws in the conspiracy would be appreciated.

 
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24th August, 2005 at 11:51:44 -

I'm pretty good at spotting plot holes, I'll give it a read if you like.

 
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