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26th February, 2008 at 11:12:16 -

Below is a link to a short introductory video sequence that will be shown before any videos I produce in the future. Just wanting your guys opinions on it, is it good? Bad? Any ways you can think of to improve it a bit? Any input is welcome

http://www.verchiesoft.com/other/wpyointro.wmv

Note: Link will be broken for the next 15 minutes or so until I change OS and get it uploaded!

 
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26th February, 2008 at 11:31:01 -

Okay, it's all uploaded now. If you have trouble viwing it, then it may be a better idea to just download it - It's only 2MB-ish

I forgot that there was music in the video - I didn't make it and it will not be used in the final version, just thought I'd say.


Edit: My main concern with the video is the door at the end. I don't think it fits in with the rest of the video, what do you think?

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26th February, 2008 at 12:35:26 -

Yeah, it's great until the door, it doesn't fit with the pixel theme at all (and the obvious photoshop effect is pretty bad). A fade to white would look better, I think. Nice work, looks good

 
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26th February, 2008 at 12:56:15 -

I'm not keen on the door too, and I think the "what pixel you on" font is a little hard to read.

But still it's got a really good style to it!

 
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26th February, 2008 at 13:27:31 -

The pace of it is pretty well done, but yeah, get rid of the door, dear (&&)

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27th February, 2008 at 16:21:16 -

Thank you for the feedback!

The door MUST go - I'll give it some thought but I may go ahead with what Neuro said and have a nice fade to white. And now onto the font! When I was designing that, I was zoomed right in, so it looked easy enough to read, but yeah when I zoomed out it did seem a little less easy on the eyes. I decided to use it anyway and got used to it as I had it on my homepage for months. But yes, I'll look into re-designing that at a later date as I had forgotten how it can be a little difficult to read.

 
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