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3rd March, 2010 at 16:18:22 -

on my t-shirt design: http://www.threadless.com/critique/63275/He_is_a_Real_Adventurer

What do you think of my suggestions listed there? Any other comments welcome.

 
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3rd March, 2010 at 18:47:14 -

The drawing's great, although I personally wouldn't wear a T-shirt with it on (I like bright colors & bold designs, even if it's not fashionable).
I think text would be good, but you need to try and think of something a bit catchier - I don't know what.

 
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3rd March, 2010 at 19:57:01 -

How about "Link on steroids" written behind him?

 
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3rd March, 2010 at 20:20:57 -

Hmm, how about "Adventure calls. Will you listen?" or "Real Adventurer."

I liked "I am a real adventurer" merely because of its deadpan nature. I think it fits.

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3rd March, 2010 at 21:24:03 -

I like the "Link on steroids" thing too

 
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3rd March, 2010 at 21:37:34 -

Unfortunately, "Link" would be considered copyrighted content, so it probably wouldn't be able to get printed with that on it.

I've uploaded a new version; what thinkest thou? http://www.threadless.com/critique/63275/He_is_a_Real_Adventurer#v2

 
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3rd March, 2010 at 21:42:10 -

What's "Prithee"?
Still think you will be able to come up with something better if you give it a while...


I just made one out of my avatar It's not very good though.

 
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3rd March, 2010 at 21:49:44 -

"Prithee" is a contraction of "I pray thee," or "please." I can't yet think of a better word to replace "Hey"... Prithee works, but it'd be better to have a one syllable word.

In case anyone reading this isn't a Zelda dork, the fairy in Ocarina of Time is infamous for constantly spouting "Hey, listen!" So, this is a parody of that.

 
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6th March, 2010 at 09:23:36 -

! You made number 1337 post! Therefore, I will buy all your t-shirts..

 
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