I like the storyline, it's proper strange and original. However, it is too much like an overview of the story rather than an explaination of how the game plays. I'd like to know how the game plays, personally. Then i'd have more of an idea of what i'd like to see in the game.
I don't understand why a alien ship would be going after a doomed race. Though you could say that the aliens didn't realise it was only men on the ship...
Apart from that im looking forward to it if you finish it dude