Sounds good. Btw, nice big word usage .. heh ... dystopian imperium ... nice .. that's latin right?
It's a really good description, but I wonder how many people will understand what it says.
You'd probably need a long overcomplicated sentence or un-grammatical phrase to describe it if you didn't use that too.
Like this: In a harsh reality of a world without freedom, people are treated with slave-like cruelty as an evil dictator rules with an iron fist.
A hero emerges from the midst of chaos to end his tyranny and bring the people justice and freedom. That hero is you!
Destiny awaits ....
I love how latin flows so well ... I really should learn it.
Look at that ... those two words, "dystopian imperium" pretty much describe the entire first sentence that I've written. What English word can do that, and so eloquently?
Blood of the Ancient One, Seen only as Shadow, Faster than Lightning, Fierce as the Greatest Dragon, Nearly Invisible, Floating in a Dream, Entered through the Demon Door, Destroyer of Evil in a Realm with a Red Sky Scarred, Who could I be ?
Heh, thanks man! I'm actually finnish, so I'm pretty glad that my english is somewhat understandable. Your example sentence was exactly what I wanted to tell, but I just didn't find the right words to write that. But the great thing about these fancy words like "dystopian" is that when you use them, people will actually want to find out what that means, and I find it nice to know those sorts of things!
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I'm actually finnish, so I'm pretty glad that my english is somewhat understandable. Your example sentence was exactly what I wanted to tell, but I just didn't find the right words to write that. 
But the great thing about these fancy words like "dystopian" is that when you use them, people will actually want to find out what that means, and I find it nice to know those sorts of things!
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