This is the start of a litlle theme I made. What do you think of it so far?
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This midi is well started so far. Your rhythm is simple, but it works well with the style of music you're attempting to emulate. However, the song sounds really empty. You just can't make a tune with only a drum beat and a flute lead, you also need at least a bassline and background chords to add some texture to your song. Some additonal notes or instruments added to the lead instrument would make it sound more alive as well; even though it's not out of place, it's hollow-sounding and somehow unconvincing.
Keep working on it, I'm sure you can do something great out of this tune.