I like the first one. It took me some time to figure out the angle to that guys head, but I see it now. maybe add some lip to the guy so its easier to see the angle of his head.
@Phizzy: Well that's not the entre picture. But in the full picture there's a bent sign in the lower left corner which reads "Welcome to Silent Hill" The picture was for a doujin I was planning on doing.
@Emil Person: Too bad I didn't actually do that picture then ^^;;
@Nuutti/hop: Thanks.
@Willy Wanker: Maybe so. We'll see if I'll change it.