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Tim

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20th April, 2007 at 18:45:28 -

Hey all, just want to gather some feedback on my template design? Thanks guys

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20th April, 2007 at 18:52:42 -

It's all pretties and stuff, but I think the navigation-bar is a bit too plain maybe. You know, it's just gradient. You could probably spice it up a little more. Hm, and I think the background of the topmost part of the site, it doesn't look very modern. Dunno if it really fits in with all the rest.

But maybe I'm just nitpicking, it's a very nice design anyway.

 
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20th April, 2007 at 19:05:28 -

IMO that's too much of an amalgamation of styles. You have floral (was "in" in 2005), gradients/glossy, the Webhero typeface doesn't suit the overall layout.

I think you should scrap everything above the menu bar, sort out typefaces or get a consistent styling going with that (ie. settle on 1 family of fonts). I don't know WTF is going on with the left of the bar but I like it and think it should be pushed out further, even going behind the first couple of menu buttons. And to be kick ass and add a taste of semiotics put the most important menu buttons over the new outstretched graphic.

Thumbs up to the consistent colour scheme. And I had no idea your surname was Wilson!

 
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20th April, 2007 at 19:28:14 -

Floral is still in. My new wallpaper in my room is floral on the feature walls.

 
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20th April, 2007 at 19:39:15 -

Not bad. Needs some more Picard, though.

 
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21st April, 2007 at 06:57:26 -

Thanks for the feedback! I've tried to consider what you said Jimmi, though I liked the floral design in the header, but that will probably change with each page anyway to other images etc perhaps... I'm not sure yet

In harmony with what you and axel said, I've spruced up the nav bar a little with a little floral design that goes behind the first link etc. I've changed a couple of other small things not worth mentioning too.

So anyway, this look any better?

www.webhero.co.uk/wh.png

 
http://www.SilverNova.co.uk


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21st April, 2007 at 06:59:28 -

Still needs some more Picard, though. ;O


Nah It looks just fine :] better this time

 
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21st April, 2007 at 07:04:41 -

That bar is much better.

 
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23rd April, 2007 at 05:27:55 -

Well I've updated the site now - www.webhero.co.uk

The logo text needs fixing at the top - as well as the page content and links. But yeah I'd like to think the design as a whole is pretty much there now..?

Thanks for your input guys!

 
http://www.SilverNova.co.uk


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23rd April, 2007 at 06:24:48 -

Looks pretty Image to me.

EDIT: looks like </img> is still needed, it ate my text!

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