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KevinHaag
Registered 28/01/2005
Points 266
29th September, 2007 at 18:26:21 -
OK, I wanna know if you guys think it would be worth it to start up a webcomic with these guys. Here's a couple of "pilot episodes"
Also, I need a name for the comic.
http://www.kevinhaag.ca
KevinHaag
Registered 28/01/2005
Points 266
29th September, 2007 at 19:36:24 -
lol, that's oooooooolllllllddddddd!
http://www.kevinhaag.ca
Tim I'm on here way too muchRegistered 25/08/2006
Points 132
29th September, 2007 at 20:19:15 -
It's very sorta... anti-climax... like Dilbert, lol.
Btw on the last picture the "Indeed" should come from the mask, that'd be better. Edited by the Author.
http://www.SilverNova.co.uk
Tim I'm on here way too muchRegistered 25/08/2006
Points 132
30th September, 2007 at 05:44:58 -
I think it's anti-climax simply because you think it's gunna be funny, but it's not
http://www.SilverNova.co.uk
DaVince This fool just HAD to have a custom ratingRegistered 04/09/2004
Points 7998
30th September, 2007 at 06:27:27 -
To be honest, I don't really like it. Not much humour, not much drawn. Also keep in mind that a webcomic will likely be long-term, so you'd need to be consistent somehow and yet introduce change over time. I don't really see it happening with this comic (except "hey look, a new character. Where did he come from?").
If you want a name, I'd go with "Hot Potatoes".
Old member (~2004-2007).
Tim I'm on here way too muchRegistered 25/08/2006
Points 132
30th September, 2007 at 09:47:29 -
(The happy adventures of) Maskboy and Fred.
http://www.SilverNova.co.uk
- Yelnek -
Registered 03/05/2003
Points 1016
1st October, 2007 at 11:23:20 -
WARNING: the following link is disgusting
CLICK AT YOUR OWN RISK!!!!
http://richarticles.2ya.com/
P.S. I think the second one was the best. The Double-Double! Hahahhahaha!
P.P.S. I like your comic. I think it could be good if updated always. Edited by the Author.
"I have dreamed a dream... But now that dream is gone from me."
Cazra Crazy?
Registered 24/07/2002
Points 4472
1st October, 2007 at 17:12:39 -
These comics are AWESOME!!! MOAR!!!
n/a
KevinHaag
Registered 28/01/2005
Points 266
3rd October, 2007 at 02:28:56 -
ok, so that's 2 for, 2 against... I think I may put up a few more later. I've got loads of them stashed in a folder somewhere around on my HD. I'll just have to remember where I stashed the folder...
http://www.kevinhaag.ca
Hempuli Crazy?
Registered 09/01/2005
Points 7968
3rd October, 2007 at 09:51:50 -
I'd say you should have more characters, and they should have more personality. Also I think you should draw all the pictures from scratch, not just copy the same like you did two times in the later comic
Also, you could create some better plot to the first comic. The pen idea is cool, but maybe something else than just 'yup'? Edited by the Author.
No sig for you.
Hempuli Crazy?
Registered 09/01/2005
Points 7968
6th October, 2007 at 03:00:55 -
Maybe something like this? -->
So he's/she's like drawing the speech bubble and the yup in it. It would be a bit more
funny (but still not very unique actually )
No sig for you.
AndyUK Mascot ManiacRegistered 01/08/2002
Points 14586
7th October, 2007 at 13:16:05 -
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Joe.H Evil Faker Registered 19/08/2002
Points 3305
7th October, 2007 at 13:17:52 -
I lol'd
My signature is never too big!!!
- Yelnek -
Registered 03/05/2003
Points 1016
26th November, 2007 at 12:11:36 -
I LOL'd even more....
"I have dreamed a dream... But now that dream is gone from me."
-Liam- Cake AddictRegistered 06/12/2008
Points 556
26th November, 2007 at 14:17:57 -
Aww...
Tell 'em Babs is 'ere...
Dr. James MD Addict
Registered 08/12/2003
Points 11941
26th November, 2007 at 17:28:35 -
The Zero Cool ones aren't too good.
http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=j--8iXVv2_U
On the sixth day God created Manchester
"You gotta get that sand out your vaj!" x13
www.bossbaddie.com
Knudde (Shab) Administrator
Crazy?
Registered 31/01/2003
Points 5125
26th November, 2007 at 18:15:10 -
I meh'd.
Craps, I'm an old man!
Attan
Registered 13/03/2007
Points 136
26th November, 2007 at 20:20:17 -
Haha! really liked them! If you can keep that high class of humor upp I would really like to see some more!
If this is the best ones, then... Nee
n/a
Hempuli Crazy?
Registered 09/01/2005
Points 7968
27th November, 2007 at 08:06:42 -
High class?
I think you should work most with the characters and the punchline.
No sig for you.
Tim I'm on here way too muchRegistered 25/08/2006
Points 132
27th November, 2007 at 09:24:29 -
everybody see www.beaverandsteve.com and feel ashamed.
http://www.SilverNova.co.uk
Hempuli Crazy?
Registered 09/01/2005
Points 7968
27th November, 2007 at 13:01:23 -
That looks awesome!
Almost my style (I think).
No sig for you.
The Chris StreetAdministrator
Unspeakably Lazy AdminRegistered 14/05/2002
Points 48488
27th November, 2007 at 14:04:35 -
Guys, I think you need to go to Humour School.
http://www.howtobefunny.com/
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Tim I'm on here way too muchRegistered 25/08/2006
Points 132
27th November, 2007 at 15:39:12 -
~Zigzag~
Registered 13/03/2007
Points 292
28th November, 2007 at 03:37:54 -
O... k.... What is humourous about the first comic? If you had him uses his pencil to make the other guy say something, or draw himself some loot or something maybe... but its been done before:
http://www.stickpage.com/pencilmationplay.shtml
http://www.stickpage.com/pencilmation2play.shtml
http://www.SilverNova.co.uk
Hempuli Crazy?
Registered 09/01/2005
Points 7968
28th November, 2007 at 07:51:51 -
The first one of those animations was best
No sig for you.