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19th September, 2008 at 23:47:50 -

Hey Check out my logos. The first one is for the project game I had put up today. The second one is the Logo for my game creation program I have at a local community center. Let me know what you think.

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EDIT: If anyone likes these and would like me to make a logo for them, just let me know. I need more work for my portfolio.

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19th September, 2008 at 23:50:49 -

I don't like the placement of the 2nd line on the first pic. The M is in too much of an awkward place.
Second ones pretty good! Maybe not keen on the typeface, perhaps bring the gaps closer together? It's as if the G is a seperate font altogether (but I love that spazzy gamey explosion coming from it!).

 
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20th September, 2008 at 00:34:38 -

I kinda thought that too. So I decided to change it. I thought about moving the words to the left so that the color change would be between the "M" and the "O". I then decided to push everything to the right and make it smaller. I messed around with the moon a little bit more too. I darkened the area where the "D" overlaps the moon. I think it looks more elegant than the first one which is something that I like. Do you think that the "V" is too far away from the rest of the word vale?

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20th September, 2008 at 01:12:38 -

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20th September, 2008 at 01:41:38 -

ahh boo! here it is again.

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20th September, 2008 at 02:31:46 -

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20th September, 2008 at 04:07:01 -

For some reason it is working on my computer, but here they are again just to make sure.


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20th September, 2008 at 04:21:43 -

Neato! Did you draw that gamesplosion by hand? ( Gamesplosion... that would be a good developer name)

 

  		
  		

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20th September, 2008 at 04:30:07 -

I guess you could call it by hand. But I did have a mouse in my hand at the time. . I have virtually no art skill when I leave the computer.

 
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20th September, 2008 at 10:57:11 -

I dig the mediafire one.

 
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20th September, 2008 at 20:26:03 -

Your game's logo is good, I suppose. The sudden shift in white text to black at the left edge of the moon is a bit awkward, though. I do like the repositioned text in the second one, though.

I think the glowing white ball thing (moon?) needs more detail, too, especially if it's supposed to be a moon. Otherwise it looks like a glowing white ball thing. More contrast, perhaps?

Edit: Playing with the image in Photoshop leads me to believe that it's a circle with a rendered clouds filter. It looks flat. The purple glow in the top right makes it seem like it's an oddly shaped circle button. I suggest that you read this tutorial ( http://dinyctis.deviantart.com/art/Planet-Tutorial-3131869 ) for tips on how to make a celestial body in the sky. (I'm assuming you used Photoshop.)

Also, the "Game Masters" logo doesn't sit right with me either. There's too much activity on the left side that detracts from wanting to look at the right side. The right side looks bland, too. I suggest you use a different font, too, because that Army-type adds contrast in the letters which makes them look broken at-a-glance.

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21st September, 2008 at 00:56:54 -

See, my original plan was to create an actual moon. (which I did in photoshop.) then I was thinking it may be a too much for the logo. I'll try finishing the logo with the moon and then I'll post it up here and show you guys.

 
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21st September, 2008 at 18:45:49 -

Whoa, that's an excellent logo.

 
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21st September, 2008 at 22:18:44 -

Very very swanky, though i actaully like the first moon-logo since the sub-writing is bigger, but they're both brilliant with little to chose between them. Very niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice!

 
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22nd September, 2008 at 12:50:37 -

Nah, I much much prefer the second moon logo

 
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22nd September, 2008 at 13:03:52 -

Very good Both of them are quite something. I'd like you try creating one saying 'wolfpack games', if you have the time of course.



 
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22nd September, 2008 at 14:13:57 -


Originally Posted by Klikmaster
Nah, I much much prefer the second moon logo



The second moon logo is very good, however if they are both reduced in size then only the first logo will be readable. They are both very nice though!

 
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22nd September, 2008 at 15:16:38 -


Originally Posted by \/\/olf
Very good Both of them are quite something. I'd like you try creating one saying 'wolfpack games', if you have the time of course.




I'll see what I can come up with in the next 2 days. I looked up my first idea on one and it seems like every "wolf pack' has the same logo. I'll cook something up.

 
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22nd September, 2008 at 16:50:17 -

I was bored so I tried my hand at remaking (definitely not trying to one-up <_< ) your logo for your game. Ended up with three versions, all at 1600x1200 (wallpaper!)

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First one suffered from "glowing white ball in the sky" syndrome, so I played with the contrast. The second one suffered from lacauniformia, or the lack of uniformity, giving it the look that's split into 3 parts, so I altered the levels. The third one looks kind of like a purple crescent moon, but has a bit too much colour.

Logiq, what font did you use for the "Gem of Lunos" part?

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22nd September, 2008 at 17:45:26 -

Trying to be the 1-uper I see No, but seriously I'm pretty amateur when it comes to art so when other people give me pointer and other ways to look at my work I really appreciate it. Those are pretty good. I do like your font choice over mine for the main text. The secondary text was Trajan Pro.
Out of the three that you've made I do like the last one the best. It does give a better feel of looking into the stars. And I like the color that you added. I'm terrible when it comes to using color.
I actually thought there were stars in the background but then I found out it was just dust from my monitor. One thing I did want to point out was that it looks more like a planet than a moon (which mine looks more like a circle than a moon.)




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