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herooftime1000


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15th April, 2009 at 06:14:00 -

moving foreground
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Still background
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Both together
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The hills are supposed to move when the characters moves and the background should stay still.

Is it ok? I think it's missing something....


 
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UrbanMonk
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15th April, 2009 at 06:32:29 -

hmm, I like your clouds.

I don't know what the level looks like so I have no way of knowing whether or not it fits well.

I do think that the foreground hills are a little too busy, maybe remove the noise, and blur it a little.
Also the highlights on the hills are a little jagged, try smoothing them out more.

It also seems a little flat, especially near the buildings, maybe give them more depth by shading, and changing the river from going straight down to a little more wavy.

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