I'm really loving Fruity Loops 8 demo and this is the only song ive finished and kind of like. Tell me what you think please! http://www.mediafire.com/?wz4dgwgnhe4
Sorry you have to download it I don't know how to do it any other way
Please don't use media fire. That is so add bogged I almost couldn't find it. Downloading at the moment though. Use the box or some other less add junked site.
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Not bad. While that loud, uh, guitar, bass, square, what is that that starts at 0:27? Anyways, whatever it is, is quite a welcome surprise. Though it is a bit overwhelming. Maybe tone that down a bit? The last part after it though sounds kind of lazy. Maybe some sort of rise and fall in there? Nice little drum jingle at the end though. Nice bass too.
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All platforming problems can be mostly solved here:
The slightly scratchy square wave was a bit overpowering, and I didn't care much for it's pattern either.
I think it should be toned down as Xhunterko said and make the pattern a little more interesting and catchy.
Also this sounds a bit like every other electronic dance song out there, a little generic.
That doesn't make it bad though. I liked this a lot! Keep it up!
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