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Riptide



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2nd October, 2013 at 02/10/2013 19:43:29 -

Hi there, before i finish this melody, tell me what do you think about it.
Yes, you can say "Omg that so bad even jordan, 4 years old, did something better" (Just kidding) But if it's bad or good tell me, i like to receive ppl comments.

Hum.. This is just the start, if you have any ideas to make this melody better, ideas are welcomed (I don't think that is english but whatever !) !

Here it is:

https://www.dropbox.com/s/cqgrxubmszt85qa/WorkInProgress.mp3

By the way i'm french sorry for my "bad" english. i swear this is not intentional !

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Candle
3rd October, 2013 at 03/10/2013 04:15:10 -

What mood are you seeking to create with the help of this music? It's too short for me to figure it out myself.

Also, I'm a big fan of percussion. Put some drum sounds in there and see what happens.

 
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3rd October, 2013 at 03/10/2013 17:22:51 -

As smr said, it's quite difficult to suggest anything as it's fairly short and we don't know what it's purpose is. Currently it has a feel of building up to a main melody I think. A brief walk through a temple corridor or dark alleyway to a battle at the end of it. That's just the first thought that sparked in my mind, anyway.

It kinda reminds me of the introductory music to the fist level of Duke Nukem 3D.

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Riptide



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3rd October, 2013 at 03/10/2013 19:09:59 -

Hi guys, thanks for your replies,
i don't know what kind of mood i'm working on, i did it by feeling
Maybe in an action scene (Walking or... i don't know ) (actually i don't know if i'm gonna put this in a game, it's for the practise )

I'm gonna try to add some percussions

Thanks for your replies, this was my first attempt x) and (in my point of view: i don't think that is "bad").

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Working on some engines, working for the fun !

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Candle
3rd October, 2013 at 03/10/2013 22:25:01 -

Hey Riptide: "A thousand mile journey begins with a single step." So kudos to you for your first steps and for gracefully accepting critique.

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