They're pretty good, how did you make them? The whole sort of atonality doesn't appeal to me, but that's nothing really to do with the construction of the song, which (as far as I can tell) is well done.
First, i take muh microphone, and my keyboard, make a lil song "The recording wav file is at highest rate, to reduce fuzz." And then I open it into sound recorder, add a few (hundred) Samples, then I open it into EZDJ to use the scratch feature and the warping. Its time consuming, sometimes, but actually the loop was a sped up fraction of an experimental song.
"Everytime you use Kazaa, a metallica band member dies a little."
Quote Jonathon Smeby.