Project: Edward Krane
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3rd March, 2009 |
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3rd March, 2009 |
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 Trey |
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Show below is the early beginnings of the story I've been working on for this game. I just looked at my older projects and realized how long I've been developing this. 6 years... Wow.
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Opening Cut scene: (A radio can be heard playing. Fade from black. Three men, one pushing a metal table on wheels enter the room through an open doorway. There is a man lying unconscious on the table. The room is dirty and strewn. All three men are wearing suits.)
Man 1: “I hate watching these.”
Doc: (lifting a thin ice pick lying beside the man on the table’s head. His accent is British) “Then leave. I don’t need you anymore.”
Man 1: (exits the room)
Man 2: “He’s blown brains out with that piece, but this makes him squirm like a little girl.”
Doc: “And you?” (The doc lifts the left eyelid of the man on the table. He places the ice pick under the mans eye)
Man 2: “Somebody’s gotta be here if this guy wakes up… but I don’t like it either.”
Doc: (picks up a small hammer.) “Well then,” (laughing) “close your eyes." (laughing, he hits the ice pick, driving it into the unconscious man’s head)
Opening Credits: (a montage scene of medical drawings of lobotomy procedures, anatomy, and random medical documents)
Eddy (Narration over credits): This is my story. However believable or unbelievable it may or may not be, it is regardless of the opinions of others, true. Edward James Krane is my name; the eighth in a long line of fathers and sons to which it was given; the first to break free from the tradition of fear caused by those fathers.
It began in August…
(Game play begins)
(Thunder…)
August 23, 1937
Eddy in-game: The rain was coming. It was in the air so thick, I could smell it.
(Player follows on screen instructions on how to move ect…)
Eddy In-Game (When player comes within view of Eddy’s house): I knew something was wrong. Sarah always kept a light on when I was coming home… The house was dark. (jump to cut scene of Eddy walking up the driveway.)
Eddy(rain starts falling): The bottom dropped out of the sky just as I noticed the couch laying in the front yard. The front window was broken. I could feel my heart pounding against my chest like a shotgun blast. The door was open. I stepped inside.
(Eddy’s foot pulls a string as he walks in. A voice speaks.)
“Mr. Krane, we have your wife and son.”
Eddy: “Who’s there!?"
(Record player continues to play) “Mr. Krane, we have your wife and son. Mr. Krane, we have your wife and son.”
(music starts playing. “Happy Days Are Here Again”)
Eddy: It was the phonograph. It had been rigged to start playing with a trip wire. Cheer Up Smile, Nertz…Eddie Cantor sang it… The house was trashed… I walked to the bedroom. It was untouched… except for the note on the bed.
Note: If you want to see them alive again, go to Chicago by train. Bring the artifact.
Eddy: The artifact. The Dracula Stone. (Cuts to Eddy walking back out the front door.) Somewhere, distantly, I heard an engine start. Someone had been watching. I ran to the motor bike. (Eddy cranks the bike and peels away slinging mud.)
Eddy: They would not leave with their life.
(Game play)
(player follows directions on vehicle control)
Eddy in-game: A truck. I was closing in fast.
(player gets closer to the truck, the driver reaches out the window and fires a shot.)
Eddy in-game: A shot. I heard the bullet fly past my head. I aimed for the back tire and pulled the trigger.
(player follows instructions to shoot at the back tire. After a few shots the tire is finally hit.)
Cut scene: (Tire blows out in a close-up. Truck veers right and slams into a tree. Eddy slides the bike to a stop. Gets up and runs, enraged, toward the wrecked truck.)
Eddy: “Where’s my family?!” The guy was trying to get out of the truck. I helped him. (Eddy grabs the guy and throws him to the ground and shoves the shotgun barrel into his chest.) “Where are they?!”
Guy: “I don’t know what-“ (Eddy shoots out the guy’s knee. He screams in pain)
Eddy: “I’ll ask again…”
Guy: “They sent me to make sure…you got the message…I don’t know…I don’t know where they took them.”
Eddy: “Who took my family!?”
Guy: (with a weird smile on his face he says-) “The Vampires…”
Eddy: (readies the gun for another shot, and shoves it again, this time on his forehead.) “Don’t play games with me!”
Guy: (again with the weird smile) “Mr. Krane, I do not fear death”
Eddy: (pulls the trigger and fires) “Enjoy it then.”
Eddy: (driving the motorcycle) I searched the truck and the body and found nothing but a telephone number in his pocket. He was a messenger, but he wouldn’t be making that phone call. They wouldn’t know I was coming. Who ever “they” were, they were all going to pay for this…dearly.
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