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herooftime1000
Registered 09/01/2009
Points 209
21st July, 2009 at 19:45:01 -
A little constructive criticism never hurt anyone!
How is it?
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Codemonkey Always SeriousRegistered 06/11/2007
Points 164
21st July, 2009 at 19:46:54 -
I can't see it because of my dumb internet filter.
You can log off any time you like, but you can't ever leave.
Jon C-B I create vaporwareRegistered 23/04/2008
Points 237
21st July, 2009 at 20:06:20 -
Looks nice! From what I can see the walking animation looks good but I would like to see it in motion before I can really tell. Here's a link to a free online GIF maker if you need one. http://gifmake.com/
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Solgryn Solgryn dot orgRegistered 20/12/2008
Points 12572
21st July, 2009 at 21:08:43 -
Looks very nice = , but i'm not fan of non-black outline Edited by Solgryn
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DMT
Registered 18/06/2009
Points 150
21st July, 2009 at 23:49:01 -
I feel the leaf thing on her head is too big. For example, look at this picture of Gardevoir:
Then Again, maybe I'm just seeing things. It's still pretty good. I didn't even realize Gardevoir had legs.
I am no longer not a taco.
OMC What a goofballRegistered 21/05/2007
Points 3519
22nd July, 2009 at 02:47:28 -
It looks good! But the shading is incomplete on the bottom row. I'm sure you knew that though.
herooftime1000
Registered 09/01/2009
Points 209
22nd July, 2009 at 05:44:03 -
Originally Posted by Not A Taco I feel the leaf thing on her head is too big. For example, look at this picture of Gardevoir:
Then Again, maybe I'm just seeing things. It's still pretty good. I didn't even realize Gardevoir had legs.
Yeah, they have legs. It's just rarely shown. And leaf things? Is that her hair? Her "cheek spikes"?
And yes, OldmanClayton, I just wanted an opinion on it before I keep going.
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Sinclair Strange Has some jaffa cakes in his coat pocket 3Registered 27/11/2008
Points 81
22nd July, 2009 at 12:57:39 -
I like alot, the animation seems smooth and the sprites are constructed very well. Only thing I would say is to use more pastel colours because the hair seems way to bright.
Nevertheless I'm digging it.
DMT
Registered 18/06/2009
Points 150
22nd July, 2009 at 18:33:25 -
Her hair, but I think it might just be me.
I am no longer not a taco.
herooftime1000
Registered 09/01/2009
Points 209
22nd July, 2009 at 23:35:44 -
Originally Posted by <Joel><Poobical> I like alot, the animation seems smooth and the sprites are constructed very well. Only thing I would say is to use more pastel colours because the hair seems way to bright.
Nevertheless I'm digging it.
Thank you so much! When I'm done with all the poses, I'll come back with the new picture for more criticism!
Cheers!
Oh, BTW, if anyone wants to use this, they can. Enjoy!
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herooftime1000
Registered 09/01/2009
Points 209
24th July, 2009 at 01:19:54 -
How is this?
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DMT
Registered 18/06/2009
Points 150
24th July, 2009 at 02:40:11 -
That is awesome! What move? To tell the truth, her hands seem a bit too big here.
I am no longer not a taco.
herooftime1000
Registered 09/01/2009
Points 209
24th July, 2009 at 02:50:26 -
Too big? Hmm...Maybe it is...
I'll see what I can do...
Oh, that move is her shooting basic psychic bullets. Edited by herooftime1000
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[DELETED] Likes to put dots on paperRegistered 08/12/2008
Points 118
24th July, 2009 at 15:26:20 -
Projectile is coming from behind the bottom right corner of her hand, a rather awkward place for someone to focus and create energy from, it seems.
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Dr. James MD Addict
Registered 08/12/2003
Points 11941
24th July, 2009 at 17:16:46 -
Originally Posted by herooftime1000
A little constructive criticism never hurt anyone!
The download section says otherwise.
http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=j--8iXVv2_U
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