Nice mesh. Looks great, but the clavicles look too low and a bit off and doesn't look very defined around her upper legs and knees. Also, it appears a bit too symmetrical, but great work nonetheless.
Actually, what I meant about the clavicles is that they are extending into the middle of the shoulder area, instead of pointing more towards the top of the deltoids. If you changed the angle of them, or just moved them up a little, I think it would bring them to the same quality level of the rest of the model .
Kudos for at least making a girl warrior who looks like she'll actually be halfway protected during actual combat. Too many times you see RPG girl warriors running around in bikinis and thongs. You'd think they'd be the first to die vs. goblins / dragons / ghouls / and the like.
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Amazing animation, its soo smooth! i have to say whatever this is for i want to play it! great work, only problem is she isnt wearing a battle thong/bikini, how is she going to defeat the goblins / dragons / ghouls etc.
Originally Posted by Windybeard Games Amazing animation, its soo smooth! i have to say whatever this is for i want to play it! great work, only problem is she isnt wearing a battle thong/bikini, how is she going to defeat the goblins / dragons / ghouls etc.
I hope that's not a serious request. Both the character model and the animation is quite professional-looking and would definitely fit at home in any MMOG.
You don't see very many 3D modelers around these parts, let alone ones who are this good. Awesome job!
Naw, he's just playing off my post on how so many games stick women in bikins and expect that to protect them vs. the forces of evil. Contrasts a bunch with the guy in full plate armor, but hey 95% of the target audience is probably 14 yr. old boys and you gotta' make your money somewhere I suppose.
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"To be a true ninja you must first pick the most stealthy of our assorted combat suits. Might I suggest the bright neon orange?"
DXF Games, coming next: Hasslevania 2- This Space for Rent!
Extremely nice model. The collarbone looks realistic, but my preference is to move them out further, as personally I see more women look that way, in terms of just how visible they are. Someone said something about it being too symmetrical, I disagree. I think there's enough variety here for a very high quality XBLA game. Or a high quality indie PC game.
twiterror: just marveling at the animations you developed again today.
I recommend you slightly adjust the animations for the character running with the sword; in my opinion it's swung out to the side of the character's body too far while she runs. I suggest you change it so that it's closer to the "guard" position, in front of the character's body, while she's moving.
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Both the character model and the animation is quite professional-looking and would definitely fit at home in any MMOG.
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